spread mock

I have made some changes to the spread as I believed that it looked unprofessional and this was also seen through feedback that I had gathered from my piers.

I have used the font used in the quotes in my last spread. I thought this would give a different look t the spread and allow it to appeal to my target readers. However I do not feel that this is a suitable font for the title therefore will be changing it back to the font used before. I have also put the written part of the article into three columns instead of two, this allows room above the text to be used and help the link between the two pages. However there is a lot of space left in the first column therefore I think that I will be adding in the quotes to allow the space to be filled.

I have not changed the image much in this is mock up, but has been increased in size. This is to allow the image to be the dominant aspect of the double pages. However, I do believe that this image doesn't have any depth, therefore doesn't give any impact to the double page spread. Therefore to improve I think that I need to change the image.