Another spread mock up

I haven't made that many changes to the double page spread, the only major changes I have done is to change the subheading above the text. I have done this as the quote that was being used didn't follow onto to the the story that followed. Therefore I have know changed it to something that will, and have changed certain words to blue to allow them to stand out. The quotation has know been moved to the right hand side page to allow it to look more aesthetically pleasing. However I do understand that some changes will still have to be made, most of these improvements will come from feedback from my piers. I have also moved the page slightly to the left to allow the page split to sit easily the allow everything to be seen instead of things being distorted due to the crease in the page.