continued spread mock up

As seen I have made the changes that I thought that needed to made from the last post. The major change that I have done, is to change the main image on the double page spread. I have used this image as it is dramatic, but has depth to the image which draws the reader into the spread, unlike the other image that was used which looked flat and didn't give the impact in which this one does.

I have also switched the layout around, as it allowed the pages to flow easier. I have also changed the font back to the original font for the heading which spread across both pages, as from feedback this font allows this spread to impact the reader and draw their eye.

I have also added a quote into the text as suggested, this allowed the text to fill all three columns looking more professional and aesthetically pleasing. The image of the album at the bottom of the text, links with the writing just beside it, therefore allowing the pages to flow, as it also lies over both pages which also links them together.

I decided to have a a sub heading above the main text of the spread, as when looking back over the research I did into double page spreads, I found that most double page spreads had a subheading to introduce the main article. Therefore I thought it would be appropriate for my spread to have the same therefore used the quote that had been placed beside Kayt in initial mock ups. However know looking at the spread, it doesn't introduce the text, therefore will need changing.